Hmm... I'm gonna try to give a little crit. I must admit you did the background really well and the pages layout look very well too. The point is, you don't know the main character enough to really feel something for him. Yea, in the first page we see an angry wolf/fox pup-thing who's angry about a hyena thing stealing his meat. It would be great if we could see how the pup risked his life to get the meat. It may be me, but the eyes of the pup always seem to look cute. He doesn't really look agressive to me. Then suddenly his eyes go red (I guess that is some fury mode) and his hair goes BURN. Then we come to page 4. I see a wolf/dog thing (the grey one I mean XD) with the familliar *gasp* expression. Then a darker wolf comes and says he's the Son of Fire. My mind goes *Huh* (I guess it's supposed to be some kinda cliffhanger).
Page 5 looks better. The first panel looks all right to me, but WAIT. Is Genghis a hyena? O_____o ~also, the huge block of text at the second & third panel didn't seem interesting. I skipped it. The last panels are good, except for the fact that I don't know who's saying what. Well, at first I saw that the two creatures had their mouth opened so I thought it was the small one talking. And why is the dark one looking straight into the camera? xD
Well that's all I can say about this comic. I'll be waiting for more Next time you make a comic page be sure you don't make the textes so long. That makes it quite boring to read.
Oh leave it be, her comics are wonderful the way they are. She doesn't have to add anything to them if she doesn't want to. I wright instead of do comics and I would love to draw these. And my char is as awesome (or at least I think as awesome ) as hers speaking power wise. Some people do things differently then others and that's ok right? I'm not trying to be mean but back off with the ungrateful comments.
It may be me, but the eyes of the pup always seem to look cute. He doesn't really look agressive to me. Then suddenly his eyes go red (I guess that is some fury mode) and his hair goes BURN.
Then we come to page 4. I see a wolf/dog thing (the grey one I mean XD) with the familliar *gasp* expression. Then a darker wolf comes and says he's the Son of Fire. My mind goes *Huh* (I guess it's supposed to be some kinda cliffhanger).
Page 5 looks better. The first panel looks all right to me, but WAIT. Is Genghis a hyena? O_____o ~also, the huge block of text at the second & third panel didn't seem interesting. I skipped it. The last panels are good, except for the fact that I don't know who's saying what. Well, at first I saw that the two creatures had their mouth opened so I thought it was the small one talking. And why is the dark one looking straight into the camera? xD
Well that's all I can say about this comic. I'll be waiting for more
And I wasn't being "ungrateful", I was trying to help. Just so you know.